Path of Exile: Sacrifice of the Vaal

Much corruption.

So bloody.




Violent sacrifice!


Sweet, my blood sacks just quivered.

Sounds great!

But just wanted to comment- is anybody proofreading these banners before they post?

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Queen Atziri. The most beautiful woman the Vaal civilization has ever seen.

Really should not be 2 sentences. That's just one example, the whole thing is rife with similar missteps.

edit: some more examples because I was bored

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Queen Atziri. The most beautiful woman the Vaal civilization has ever seen. A monarch who ruled from a throne room of mirrors, holding court as naked as the day she was born. Hers was a sovereignty of seduction. Of Grace.

The Grace of skin and flesh, of poise and dance, of attraction and manipuation. And when Atziri dreamed, she dreamed of Grace made eternal.

^Is a huge mess. There is a mention of birth which does not match the tone of the rest of the passage. Before and after the paragraph break are talking about the exact same subject (in other words: the break is misplaced if the sentences are going to be in that order). "And when" connects to nothing- it's the first time either dreaming or a time event are mentioned.

Rewrite:

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Queen Atziri was the most beautiful woman the Vaal civilization had ever seen. She ruled from a throne room of mirrors, holding court nude so all might glimpse her Grace. Hers was a sovereignty of seduction.

Atziri dreamed of Grace made eternal. The Grace of skin and flesh, of poise and dance, of attraction and passion. Her wish to paint her people in shades of immortal beauty instead drowned them in blood.

as the "first" said, "Bam" it is :) I'm so hopping for a player self semi-controled additionnal content from in-game mechanics at high level, so the game will never stop growing by itself...


...UNTIL THE LAST EXILE IS FALLING !!!!

Looks and sounds good, now what about (de/re)sync? I still don't know if you've realised how much enjoyment it takes from the game.

i really hope you will do something to pvp on 5 march

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PolarisOrbit wrote:

Sounds great!

But just wanted to comment- is anybody proofreading these banners before they post?

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Queen Atziri. The most beautiful woman the Vaal civilization has ever seen.

Really should not be 2 sentences. That's just one example, the whole thing is rife with similar missteps.

Do you read books? It's perfectly legitimate to use that structure to enforce a longer pause than a dash would imply.

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Cig wrote:

Guess we finally know what the 4 sections of the Map Device are for.

That was my thinking exactly.

Silent hill'ish.
I wonder if those items are quest items or real new items!

Those 4 items could actually be set items, omg omg omg. it's strange really that there's no set items

hype !