ZiggyD's Community Unique Design - Names and Flavour Text

IGN: Daario__Naharis, Captain__Harlock, Paul__Atreides
Marty__McFly, Silk__Spectre. Kylo__Ren
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CalamET wrote:
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Rivaled Synergy, Vanguard Belt

"With one, you are unkillable.
With the other, you are unstoppable.
Only when combined,
Will you truly be immortal
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Very nice +1
For a belt that sounds fitting for a Kaom theme, I believe something like this would be most fitting.

More about the flavour text and history linked to the Battle of Lioneye's Watch
The name of the belt is self-explanatory and resonates throughout the flavour text.

As for the flavour text, instead of describing the belt's qualities directly to the belt in a drab and boring way, I described the belts qualities by attributing those qualities to King Kaom himself and a bit of historical lore, to which the ending line concludes the enemies (General Marceus Lioneye and his Gemling Army) who fought against Kaom, lost the battle in Lioneye's Watch, according to the lore here: http://pathofexile.gamepedia.com/King_Kaom

Note: I originally wanted to put the flavour text in "quotations" so as to have been said by Hyrri herself (one of Kaom's best female archers of great importance who took part in the Battle of Lioneye's Watch), but then I decided to leave that up to the developers (if the text is implemented).

The very bottom of the flavour text would have looked like this if said by Hyrri
- Kaom's best archer, Hyrri, said of Kaom after the Battle of Lioneye's Watch

Perhaps this could be the belt Kaom infamously wore during the Battle of Lioneye's Watch that General Marceus Lioneye's head was attached to.

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Last edited by HeavyMetalGear#2712 on Jul 20, 2016, 1:19:39 PM
I am pretty content with this one.

Last edited by Sabrael#1943 on Jul 19, 2016, 1:08:14 PM
destiny of hands

one hand have nothing,
two hands at least has a sound.

-Turk of the Vaal.
Give me your heart,
And i will give you beauty,
Beyond your darkest dreams. -Atziri, Queen of the Vaal
Item Name: Upholder

Text: You don't need pants to have a belt keeping your cloth up and tight.
1)Name: Rhea's Rockgiant

Text: "Through Stone & Wind I release my Fury" - Mother of Titans




And a more funny version:

2)Name: Rory's Balance & Design

Text: "Need Support?"
Last edited by pingo52#1671 on Jul 19, 2016, 12:52:10 PM
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mynameisonlyforthegods wrote:
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illectrik wrote:
The damage seems pretty low, considering how much armor and evasion you would have to stack you wouldn't be able to get much else from the tree and the belt itself can't make up for it.

I might be biased because I want the belt to be good, but per 200 (or somewhere around there) seems much more fair.


the item needs to be balanced for ll auradin guadian in mind. my buddy gets over 90k armor on his armor based char when i tag along with a guardian, that's already over 225% increased damage.


90k armour, but how much evasion? Design a belt specifically around group play? Sounds like an item that will rarely be used.
Harness of the Shining Vanguard

They advanced without fear and struck without hesitation. They laid low all about them with merciless efficiency. They thirsted for glory, and drunk deeply with every stroke of the blade. They were the best. They were invincible. Or so they thought.

- Excerpt: Tale of the Shining Vanguard
Quod efficax non stultum
Last edited by elindred#4723 on Jul 19, 2016, 4:35:44 PM

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