PoE poem
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It's offensive to see a poetaster with an adamance to continue writing bad verse
One of the reason why metrical verse Is in such a pitiful state today is due to your exact attitude; you write for your pleasure but it's nothing to be proud of; if you dare write in verse you ought uphold the obligation to not embarrass your community or the form you're working with And yes I have background in philology and classics and yes you need more practice before anyone should pat pat your back You obviously have a respect for traditional verse - so do it right Edit: or you can take the easy way out and do free verse like rest of modernity- their poetry is sooooo good as well :^) kids https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PbFE90QKJIw vs adults https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jzysxHGZCAU 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 business a-blazing but no more t-shirts Last edited by FullCust#7387 on Sep 4, 2015, 5:48:36 AM
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...Says the fellow whose posted critiques have included the term "boo boo." Sorry to hear that my humble work offends you, but I'll just go on enjoying. You go ahead and "encourage" someone else. =^[.]^=
=^[.]^= basic (happy/amused) cheetahmoticon: Whiskers/eye/tear-streak/nose/tear-streak/eye/ whiskers =@[.]@= boggled / =>[.]<= annoyed or angry / ='[.]'= concerned / =0[.]o= confuzzled / =-[.]-= sad or sleepy / =*[.]*= dazzled / =^[.]~= wink / =~[.]^= naughty wink / =9[.]9= rolleyes #FourYearLie Last edited by Raycheetah#7060 on Sep 5, 2015, 5:01:31 AM
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" If I could call out what your writing truly is I would be on probation thx 2 bex kids https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PbFE90QKJIw
vs adults https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jzysxHGZCAU 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 business a-blazing but no more t-shirts |
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" I'll call yours out for what it is in one word: ostentatious. And if Bex was watching you'd probably already have been warned/probated because that statement is specifically in the forum guidelines. Taken from the Hostile Comments section of the Forum Guidelines: " Keep it up Ray, some of us "unlearned" people enjoyed your writings. :) Just a lowly standard player. May RNGesus be with you.
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Very good Poem Ray thank you for sharing here
Good luck and have fun Drak :) Last edited by Empathic_Drak#7584 on Sep 14, 2015, 9:43:48 AM
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Well done Ray! Ignore the troll. Bex loved it enough to put it on today's daily announcement! :D
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