The End of the World as We Know It

Very nice, how a lore sub forum and also a fanfiction sub forum? The world is rich enough to support both and will foster more great writing like this!
IMO, best sentence in the story:
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DalaiLama wrote:
The deity of chance, Ranumgen, has no concept of need, desire or fate.


I'm a big fan of lore and world-building in fiction, so I especially enjoyed your lore explanation of some of the game mechanics, like the story of the foolish wise king, and Alira's matyrs. That stuff at the end though, about finding the right colour gems to socket into a R-G-B linked item with a portal gem was a bit confusing, and doesn't seem consistent with the mechanics of the game. Then again, I've never gotten far enough to do maps, so maybe it does reflect some end-game mechanic that I do not know of.

Anyway, excellent story! I may be inspired to write my own in-universe lore at some point.
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Last edited by VoxelSquid on Jan 21, 2013, 4:21:03 AM
Damn props to the OP that was some nice writing! I could of used your help in English 2 back in college haha =P
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Bump; very well done.
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