Zeno Ziggy Project Awakening Build Reviews

http://poeurl.com/zqnbzn6 split arrow phys crit

Duelist / Ranger : Poison Arrow

crit shockwave totem http://poeurl.com/zr34F59

I'm looking to make a crit 2h sword ice crash could you please review what i got?
http://poeurl.com/zr36wxA

Also I was thinking about a crit kinetic blast with a wand could you tell me if this is good or critique it?
http://poeurl.com/zr35337
Also could you possibly make a Glacial Cascade crit version?

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dual flame totem, crit, low life, shadow/witch

http://www.pathofexile.com/passive-skill-tree/AAAAAgYARXyXlxXn8Gtzs4w2UEJVS1M1YeKTJ76Kf8bviGwLoS-ioxGW-Tci9FF0D8QHHg5I189tGRqBO3yVLl3ySbEti9lbEVCmmbjK8NVw1R_HGyU1uUlRj_qJ0yt4S66nK3vX6_VwUiyc6QLDCWSdKgsFQhEt34q5k_Id8-pBlnyD0PWnlOvuXl2nCNH92t2PRtgkHRQ2xY5k-tKLeoPz96YWb2aeAW9OrkShtvrjaiSqcg9Y5eL3sTauEjbpcYWUb8MTKhOESFcpZlRaK1xrRtej8sNtHNyPGhcvZOdV1oCk

2 handed axe rt cyclone http://poeurl.com/zr36GIl

Support character

Please check out my build, it focuses have a support skill to apply bleed, chill, fortify and pull enemy together and then go ham with the main skill!

I think Wild Strike or Cyclone will be the main skill and frost blades will be the support.

The build will also use Herald of Thunder to curse Temporal Chains and Enfeable.

More details here:
https://www.pathofexile.com/forum/view-thread/1303593

http://poeurl.com/zr4XXvc Offline planner

Crit Freezing Pulse Dual Curse

+3 Crit implicit staff 5l
Lightning Coil 5l using Cold Snap/IAE/COH/Warlord's Mark/Temp Chains

Freezing Pulse = 5 link FP/Cold Pen/Spell Echo/PCOC/Added Lightning-"hypothermia"

Should be able to run lvl 10 Clarity/HoT/HoI/AA

Not focusing on as much life due to lightning coil/MoM.

Plan on going down to templar tree for more life and cast/spell damage