New class: The Vigilante

Ok not really but being that there is no "fanfiction" board, this is the only place I believe appropriate to post this.

I came up with my own exile and wrote all the dialogue he would say if he was in the game (yes I have too much time in my hands), hell I would even voice act him if I had the equipment.

Here is all of his dialogue:

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Intro:
As I have been denied love, humility, respect and acceptance from others
As they have rejected me, mocked me, beaten me, shattered me
I have taken it upon myself to make them pay
To make all the ones that abuse, prey, intimidate and oppress pay

I spilled their blood out of revenge, out of justice

they have exiled me to wreaclast but it's only a question of time before they will face my wrath

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On the Twilight Strand: No one will stop me
On the Coast: Good people, a rarity in this world
On the Tidal Island: The hostility of this land is but the same as oriath, just on a more direct level
On the Lower Prison: No one should ever be caged (D2 reference)
On the River Crossings: There is no land that I belong to
On the Fellshrine Ruins: God is but just the despair and ignorance of men
On Solaris: Man is always trying to alter reality and not often for good
On the Library: The world is so distant from us, we are unconscious of ourselves
On Lunaris: This place...it disgusts me

Having killed Fairgraves: I knew not to trust you fairgraves
Having killed Brutus: In the end, I am as much evil as the creatures I slay
Having killed Merveil: the law of nature is to prey on the weak, I will break that law
Having killed Fidelitas: For all the lives I have ended, I will take my own but not before I am finished
Having killed Kraityn: I will hunt each and every single one of you, one by one.
Having killed Alira: I have need for no one
Having killed Oak: you either walk a straight line or you don't walk at all
Having killed Gravicious: your death will pave the way to a better world
Having killed Piety: For all those people that you used as tools, for all the suffering you have done, death is too sweet for you
Having killed Dominus: God? God would have been the next to die for having created this horrible world

Full inventory: I shouldn't carry so much
Using skills in town: I mustn't
Out of mana: no mana
Not enough Strength: not strong enough
Not enough Dexterity: not fast enough
Not enough Intelligence: not wise enough
Occasionally, after killing a rare: DIIIEEE!
On the Medicine Chest: If I can help someone help others, I will
Upon receiving Siosa's reward: I am not worthy of any sympathy or kindness
To Piety, in the upper prison: whatever you are up to piety, I have a feeling it's not for the greater good
To Piety, at the Prisoner's Gate: You are testing my patience too far
To Piety, in the Chamber of Sins: I will and it will be for you
To Piety, in the crematorium: Coward, stop running away from me
When picking up a bust: Man should not wish to be remembered for who they are but only for what they stand for

Achieving Level 2: I will not allow myself to die
Achieving Level 10: I cannot allow them to win
Achieving Level 20: None shall escape me
Achieving Level 30: they believed they were harming me but in reality, they were creating a monster
Achieving Level 50: the whole world will feel my vengeance
Achieving Level 100: I will shape reality anew, to the image of nothingness


A brief explanation about his passive tree location and nodes:

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He would actually start outside the tree. Nodes to his left would only be accessible to him while the right would link towards the bottom portion of the strength area.

His class specific passives on his left would be be focused on chaos, maybe a keystone that converts all melee physical damage to chaos damage, lots of chaos resist and increased chaos damage. Overpowered maybe but it fits to character's attributes


A brief explanation of what he would look like:

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If I was any good at drawing I would just do so but I suck. I would be so thankful if any of you could draw him for me, that would be really awesome.

White male, medium size, very "cut", Long black hair reaching the torso with some covering his face, thin beard.

Wearing just a long black trench coat and black pants, so bare feet and torso naked. When equipping armor, the parts that have pants and sleeves would not replace his pants and coat, only the torso will have armor, for the exception of shoulder plates. Any footwear and gloves equipped will go under his pants and coat.

For example, wearing a "gladiator plate" it would pretty much remain the same except the "skirt?" would not be visible.

For example, wearing a "saintly chainmail" sleeves and pants would not be visible, only the torso would remain with the character's coat and pants.


If you read all that, wow I'm impressed, thanks a lot!

If I had money, I would ask GGG to implement him in the game, one can only dream
Last edited by Coal48#3951 on Nov 1, 2013, 12:58:08 AM
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cool name
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torta21 wrote:
cool name


thanks bro
Not another class.
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DirkAustin wrote:
Not another class.


It's not a real suggestion, I posted this in general discussion originally but it got moved to here.

What would your exile be like?
I disagree with starting outside the Tree.

If anything, it'd be cool if GGG actually made the Tree a SPHERE.

That way you'd have the Top = witch; the 120º leftside = Marauder; and the 120º right side = Ranger.
The front would be Scion and the back could be Murderer.

I wouldn't call it Murderer, though.
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Nurvus wrote:
I disagree with starting outside the Tree.

If anything, it'd be cool if GGG actually made the Tree a SPHERE.

That way you'd have the Top = witch; the 120º leftside = Marauder; and the 120º right side = Ranger.
The front would be Scion and the back could be Murderer.

I wouldn't call it Murderer, though.


How would you call him?

And what do you guys think of the character look/personality wise and the fact the he would be focused on "melee/chaos"

you got the witch who is = ranged/elemental
templar = melee/elemental
marauder = melee/physical
ranger = ranged/physical
duelist = hybrid/physical
shadow = hybrid/elemental
scion = full hybrid

So melee/chaos would be a first and it could open the possibility for a ranged/chaos and even more.

The idea of making him start outside the tree was from him having "class only nodes". It reduces freedom a bit, so I see why you don't like it though.
Well I'm sad :(

I just wanted to hear some feedback on the dialog I wrote and see what exiles you guys would add to the game.
I'm going to be very honest.
Your concept of Murderer is just a reskin of Shadow.

Different story, different looks, same concept.

GGG already said they're considering adding gender options and even different skins for the characters.

But that's probably not going to be anytime soon.
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first of all, i like your thoughts and imagination.

don't be rude to this guy, he really took his time and tried to come up with some good idea for a future class that belongs to wraeclast - and in my opinion he didn't fail at all, at it.

i also like that you've asked in general, if somebody would draw your description of your desired looking class. i can't draw at all, same as you - else i'd give it a try, and i'm sure if somebody who read this, really is able to draw well - he will do so! (maybe even someone from GGG would do it :P)

you brought some good idea from your point of view - i even think GGG could look into that and take some stuff out of that for a future project of them.

keep your motivation, you did well and you will do well later on.
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