[3.22] Righteous Cold Juggernaut - plese help evaluate viability

Build mantra: the player must survive
Build idea: basically RF build with some adjustments, using cold over time as damage
Build hopes: do not hit a wall
Build considerations: low DPS

The build: https://pobb.in/XTn5tnvuItUb | https://pastebin.com/q9fkX1v2

There are no items, just the tree and main skills. Yes, the patch notes for 3.22 are yet to be revealed, but still - would this work?

Alternative boneshatter build: https://pobb.in/hElw-R1e-jZV

Suggestions, recommendations, etc are welcomed.

Hey mate,
seems your new to building characters in poe.
If your plan is to beat kitava these builds are ok i guess.

If you try to see much past the tutorial, id recommend scrapping both builds.

Ill just be blunt. You waste many points, ignore good nodes and go out of your way to take bad ones. There is little synergy in your plans and mechanically you prioritize the wrong things. For example take the jewel sockets and dont take magebane when you have no dex.

I highly recommend you get a proven build and try to figure out why it is built that way, just play one, or take the base and give it your personal twist.

I didnt do any of that and failed many times.